The chilly, harmattan-clogged air bit right into Idaya's bones as she
trudged with her bucket of slushing water to the outdoor bathroom of her face-me-I-face-you
building.
The torch of the 2nd generation Nokia phone she held was the only
source of illumination she had as she moved in the pitch dark, and the sound of
her slippers slapping the caked earth the only non-cricket sound that
accompanied her. It was 3.30am and definitely not the godliest of hours for a
bath, but as she planned on leaving home very early that Monday morning for an interview,
it was necessary.
She got to the bathroom, a simple unpainted structure with zinc
roofing and door that was made from the same material, which could be locked
from the inside with a roughly fashioned hook. And just as she was about to
reach out and push open the door, she heard the sound of water pouring heavily on
concrete. There was already someone having a bath in there.
“Ooooh oh, someone still beat me to it despite my waking up so early,”
she grumbled to herself . “Na wa for
this my compound people o, they are not smiling.”
She decided to wait there for the person to finish up, to prevent
someone else going in before her again. She sat on a block just a short
distance from the bathroom and began to play snake game on her phone, leaving the
torch on. She would have been scared sitting out there all alone at that hour,
but the fact that there was another human having his or her bath close by prevented
her from being afraid.
After completing three levels of the game, her impatience grew. The person
was still yet to come out; she could still hear the continuous crash of water being
poured over a body and tumbling over the concrete floor of the bathroom.
“Na wa o. What kind of endless
bath is this? Is it drum of water the person brought?”
Her bucket of warm water was fast turning cold, exposed in that
weather as it was, and the cold was seeping deeper into her system by the
minute. All she had on was the wrapper she tied around her body and the towel she
had slung across her bare shoulders; those were not enough protection against
such a strong harmattan cold.
She looked down at the phone. The time was now five minutes to four. She
had been out there for twenty-five minutes; the person in the bathroom had been
having his or her bath for over twenty-five minutes!
Enough was enough. She got up, went over and banged on the bathroom’s
metallic door. “Ah ahn, please, come out
now. I have been waiting for you since,” she lamented.
There was no response, instead the person hit the door back twice, angrily,
each louder than hers.
Idaya stepped back and resumed the wait. She tried to resume the game too
but could not concentrate on it and just kept tapping her foot impatiently. “I
don’t know how someone can just be this wicked. Keeping someone out here in the
cold and just wasting time anyhow.”
Another ten minutes went by, still the person did not come out; did not
even venture to offer an apology or reassurance that he or she will soon be through.
All Idaya continued to hear was the sound of water. Her impatience turned to
full blown anger then and she returned to the bathroom, proceeding to bang the
door with both hands. It swung open under the pressure of her hands, apparently
the person had not locked it behind.
As the door opened, the sound of water stopped abruptly and Idaya quickly
began to apologize, saying she had not meant to open it. But when the door
swung open fully and the light of her torch fell into its enclosure, she saw
that there was nothing in there, no one!
At once her head went heavy on her neck with fear, her mouth forming a
soundless ‘o’ in terror. She turned around and went flying back in the direction
of her home, screaming breathlessly as she went. When she barged into the one-room
apartment she and the rest of her family resided in, her scurry and her gasping
shout woke her mother and brother up.
“What is it, what is it?” they asked, but she was too shocked to
respond. She could not find the words to describe what she had just experienced;
was not even sure what it was she had experienced.
She was only certain of one thing – that would be the last time she
would ever venture out to have a bath so early in the day.
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